^ my friend Hannah. no i didn't comment on my own poem lol

Omg i can't believe that's true, its what nightmares are made of. that's a great poem though...take care x x x

What a bad thing to happen to a child you did a wonderful job telling his story keep up the good work

Omg i am literally on the verge of tears. You are one of the most talented people on this sight. With this poem you managed to nearly have me crying my eyes out. Congrats and keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Luv jess xoxoxoxox

Brought me to tears.
Excellent job.

Oh my God! What a very sad and rather depressing poems! It has quite horrified me, even before I saw that it is a true story. Great job!

Damn itz sad to know this is true but itz good u r writing bout it good job!

Wow. Amazing. And it hurts just more to know that the little boy was left all alone. Great write! 5/5

You are amazing..your goin on my favs

Wow ur really talented, this is a great poem and is very believable. the flow and rythm was good 2. keep writing

Nothing like this should ever have to actually happen. I prefer to leave the horrible and magical things in books songs and poems...

It was a wonderful poems however, I'm sad that it's true.