wow xceelent i reli love the last verse its beautiful bt sad well dun and keep writinxxx

wow! That was very good! I loved it..Great Job! Stay strong..

Thanx for the comment on my poem..

Lotz of Love,
Katie

very interesting! i like it! 25/5

Well done. It's an easy read and relatable keep it up.
P.s plz comment on a few of mine

you have real talent.. :)

Strong emotion coming through there. Keep it up.

xxx