Comments : In One World…

  • 19 years ago

    by Iyla

    wow this is like the best poem that i have ever read, the words are just so powerful. you did an amazing job!!
    never ever stop writting.
    *~Take Care ~*
    <3
    -Kit

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    This is a poem that so many people can relate to, including myself, its got a hopeful yet sad feeling to it, and I really love it! Keep it up xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Wow, such a great poem, which everyone has a connection with, I love the fact I can look at your poems and just be spellbound, so beautiful, well done, keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    great poem, real emotional. i liked how you did the pause and play, creative idea. you really captured the saddness of the world with this poem.

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ hugs and love~

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Andrea, Well written and you did capture the sadness that is truly in this world. Very emotional and sad, but a beautiful job you done. hugs, love, *Ann*

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    omg great poem i love it but so sad at least there is singing! i wonder if the monkey babies could form a new band called the nutties and nuttettes lol they would rock and they could make everyone smile and take away the bad people and force them to stroke them lovingly lol well keep it up!

    Love, Taylor

  • 19 years ago

    by Lance Hardy

    Beautifully said Andrea. Great job. Everyone can probably relate to this in some way. Keep it up.

    Jeff

  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    omgosh. freakin amazing. that was so freakin awsome. i hope that you are doing ok? are you? be strong ok. remember you have to be strong. i totally freakin loved this poem. awsome work

    In one world someone is alone.
    Their dreams consist of fairy tales
    They don’t want to awake to sadness
    Or be the person who always quails.

    favorite stanza. great job. much Love always

    Nick

  • 19 years ago

    by foreverISgone

    great job thaat song/poem was awesome

  • 19 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is amazing...really creative...good job...keep on writing and take care...
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 19 years ago

    by Danielle

    Wow, that was strong, powerful, and really emotional. Wow. You should be proud of yourself, you're an amazing writer, but I guess you don't need me to tell you that... Anyways, amazing work. Keep it up. Hope everything's alright...
    Always, Danielle.

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    This is an amazing poem - heart felt indeed. I hope everyone in these situations can take a moment, if just to pause, and be eased of a little pain. I for one, did. Well done girl <3

    Love yah,
    Kal.

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Cool. One of your best. It was amazing.

  • 19 years ago

    by jescelle

    theirs nothing stronger then love girly, and i love you!!!!!!!xoxoxoxoxox
    jescelle

  • 19 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    Andrea this was beautiful your poems get better and better everytime..i loved this one and the style

    Unloved ♥

  • 19 years ago

    by Fierce

    This is such a meaningful poem, definately one of your best...well one of my favourite anyway. You are such a talented person. Keep them coming.
    Love Sarah

  • 19 years ago

    by Solace

    Amazing.. It gets one thinking about the world.. Take care (always)

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 19 years ago

    by Victoria

    Wow great poem its so strong and has such a great message def one of your best!

    take care

  • 19 years ago

    by joe

    wow that was amazing, i fell in love with that poem, that was just awesome. Keep your head up Andrea, maybe one day we wont have to worry about pain, physical and emotional....
    take care,
    love ya bo,
    -Allen

  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    hey thank you for your comment. i am not cutting, but its getting harder haha. thank you, you are my strength in a way. i can always trust you. your a good friend, thanks. im proud of strong you have been. keep it up. hope your ok? Much Love Always

    Nick