Comments : In One World…

  • 18 years ago

    by Richard

    nice poem i love 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Alyson

    wow, really nice. I loved how that poem could relate to everyone. It was very well put together, very rhythmic. I like it alot.

  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    a beautiful poem! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    Holy crap that was so good I dont really know what to say. Defidently a 5. Wow, I am left in awe.

  • 18 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    This is REALLY good great job i love it
    *Amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by Alissa

    *BEST* Poem I Have Ever Read!!! How do you come up with this stuff! Your extremely talented! This has to be one more that reallly made me think and made me real thankful thanks for opening up my eyes!

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    outstanding i agree with all of the above praise. A beautiful poem by a beautiful tallent 5>>>>>>

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    outstanding i agree with all of the above praise. A beautiful poem by a beautiful tallent 5>>>>>>

  • 18 years ago

    by HJ

    Wow, what a beautifully written piece. Diction and flow flawless. Very thought provoking with much visionary passion.

    I have read some of your other work, still reading he!he! you truely are an awe-inspiring poetic magician, I look forward to reading more.

    Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragment. Check out my latest poem 'Incomplete without you' let me know what you think.

    Your friend
    Hayley

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley

    wow, thats all i can say, this is amazing, great write

  • 18 years ago

    by foreverISgone

    Wow that was rather interesting i liked it verz much