Hey everyone.

Please drop a comment. Be honest in what you say. I dont care if you hate it, its your opinion.
I'm new to writing freeverse, so any advice would be taken seriously.

Thanks all,
Shirlz

It's really emotional. I liked just the way you've written! Good job!

This is excellent!

Keep E'm Coming

Hey gorgeous! This is such an amazing poem! I luv the stlye you wrote it in! Its so unique! Kudos girl! Anyway you poem is written really well, all your rhyming flowed and everythin! Keep up the awesome work lil one! =D
~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo