thanks I appreciate your comment

Wow...thats really good...I love the way you put the story into a book, and then didn't say til the end that it's your past the book was about.(even though it's in the title) just gave it a neat feeling.

Really good peice, i really like the way that it seems at the begining that you are reading about someone else and that then at the end it turns round.

one comment thouhg is that the line: "I discovered a little girl running away from everything trying to go and hide" seems a little too long.

overall a brilliant peice

5/5