Very Nice! Sounds like I would rather have this dream. The one I wrote about forget that this one sounds like more fun! Great job! Take Care! Brooke

ive been reading a heap of your poems and im absolutely hooked. you have a true gift and i admire you so much. dont ever stop writing! love your stuff so much you've just gotta go in my favs. :) oh by the way i love your quotes. im obsessed with quotes an yours are great!! take care
love cim xx

Very good poem and it flows really well thanks a lot for the comment on my poem!

take care

I just give 5/5 man it was great poem BRAVO

Mahamed

This is great poem thats all i can say thankssss

Hot but not dirty, that takes talent. You did agood job with the word chose and the imagery, the flow was pretty good and the emtion was clear. 5/5

I totally like this poem, but it should be placed in the explicit category, not the regular love category! The depth and imagery you created with your words is fantastic, a classic love scene! I enjoyed this poem!

Great job.. the beging is very romantic. but as you continue to read i think you make it seem less romantic.. especially when you say "grind"

but still its a nice poem..but i think it should be in the explict poems