I spy with my little eye the sun

by Sinister Soire   May 7, 2005


I spy with my little eye
Up in the perfect sky

Something red and something blue
Something heading strait for you

Solar beams around the earth
Shedding light like silent birth

Piercing rays born from the sun
Never stopping until they’re done

Piercing through no matter what
Tearing holes and making cuts

Burning scolding open flesh
Is all it takes to refresh

Going to the beach again
Despite the throbbing pain

I spy with my little eye
A reason hardly worth to die

copyright 2005 © Logan brown

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    great job!! 5/5
    plz comment on mine too! thanks!

  • 18 years ago

    by Angeline

    I thought this one was fun, though it wasent meant to be fun. I just got this funny picture in my head...anyway, I really liked they way you coloured the sun beams, and the rest of it was also exelent:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Lovely hun <3 Trés beau. xxxx. It's graceful, the burning flesh and stuff is a little, extra, but it's all good =) I love it, and I love you, you're so amazing, so perfect...I love you. <3 Great work, never stop, stay strong xxxxx <33

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

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