I cant give you enough praise for your writing my dear, this poem captures what everyone feels at one time or another, fantastic as always..Love, Tim

Great similie in stanza 2! Keep it up, Holly! I LOVE YOU dollz, 5/5

Love,
Heather

You can feel the anger, can't you? I love the lines 'inflicting bitter revenge' and 'i am the creator' . Imagery's a beaut!

And yet another great one

Dave....