Im soooo sorry about your brother and i hope he will be ok! Great poem by the way! I liked it a lot!
Best Wishes,.....
Haily
XOXOXOXOOX

im soo sorry about your brother as well. I think the message was very sweet and amazing.. but i think you could loose the repition in 4th line because it really doesnt fit in with your stanzas...
my deepest wishes go out to your brother
take care

this poem is rlly sweet, i hope ur brother gets better as it sounds as though your rlly close. check out my poems :). love ya *Anna* xxxxx

I'm truely sorry but your poem wqas beautiful... I hope your brother gets better coz I know i'd die without my brother's!!
May God be with you and your family.....

that was very well written i like the style. keep up the good work.
~Freak~

omg this poem was so touching and sad. im sorry about ur brother. 5/5 feelbetter

Aww... *hug* Im so sorry about your brother.. 5/5

wow, just reading you comment at the top made me sad the poem holds feeling and im sorry about your brother.

Jacs
xxx

beautiful poem to your brother......

You are a great writer..5/5 for sure..keep up the great work..
*~*cryingontheinside*~*
xoxoxo

this was a good poem it expressed what they felt which is hard for some poeople to do

ohhh this is such a gorgeous poem, you really have done a great job! it's very emotional

take care of yourself xox

awwwwww :( its really sad but still beautiful. i really like it.

<5

Matt

Awww that's so sad!! I'm sorry to hear about your brother. I hope he is ok..

Love much,
Tiff

great poem very touching I loved it, Im truly sorry about your brother and hope that he will recover soon.
P.S. thanks for all the comments it really means alot to mean Ill read most of yours later on I have an appointment I have to go to in 30 minutes.

nice poem :( and sad too. well done

Aw...that reli shows how much u love yur brother

soooo goood!! 5.5 i enjoyed that!

much love shannon

Great poem. Thanks for the comment and vote. And yes, that is me in the picture. <3

This is a very great for somebody of your age. It has a nice tempo to it