I think its a great poem! I know how you feel. I'm in love with a guy thats 23 and I'm 16. Society doesn't think we should be together. My family doesn't approve of it either. But we're so in love. So I can only wait until I'm 18. I think your work is great. I'd like it if you emailed me sometime. Its: dbridgerton@hotmail.com What is it that people don't like between you and the person you want to be with? Age, color, what? Email me soon k?

Love always,
Brittany

oh yea. forgot. i gave u 5/5.

hey. i think its an awesome poem. im in the same boat. im in love with this great guy. were engaged. im so excited. but i have to wait till im out of high school. in two years...(im almost done with my sophomore year) and everybody says that we cant make it work. we have too many problems. we just dont mix.. stuff like that. so we cant hang out when im around my friends or when hes around his coz they dont really approve of us dating. (they dont know were engaged). i though it was a really good poem. keep it up. you should email me some time. that would be super cool. my email is...kjacobsen@nelhs.org. thanks. keep up the writing!!! kelsey...

This was really good! I know the feeling except I'm the only one that knows and it's more like 'He'll Never Find Out'.

thats a really cute poem i love it so much

i like, i like! vurry vurry nice!