Awwww! I hope things start looking up for you real soon!!!! It's a touching poem with a great flow! Keep up the good work! Lotsa luv Gem xx (thanx 4 da comment!)

That poem was very good ...Keep up the great work...Thanks for commenting on my poem..
Tisha

Its a very touching poem...you are gifted in writing. Good work 5/5... thanks for the comment.

I like it a lot but some of the rhymes seem forced....keep it up though...thanks for the comment on my poem! luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Awazing poem.. loved it lots. evry word touched me very well. thanks so much for commenting, it means alot.

Great poem, I know how you feel. The girl I love goes on and on about the person she loves, I know upsetting it is.

You really have a way with words dont you.you put down your emotion so well.I know how it feels to lose someone. keep up the great work I will check back for more 5/5

Aww thanks for the comment, i like this one alot...you get 5 of 5 too. Bye bye

**Kemma .

That's a sweet poem.
Keep up the great work.

That was really sweet....it's always difficult to lose the ones we love...sometimes the only way to show how much we truly love them is to let them go....I wish you the best...great job!