Love Wars : Episode 1 - Only Hope

by Prince Enigma   May 9, 2005


A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away,
Is a beauty deeper than hyper space,
Surrounded by a thousand asteroids,
Is a solar system where we shall embrace.

Finally destroying that evil death star for you,
Scattered into a million pieces,
Shattered by the struggle of power,
Until then our love ceases.

To bring us "A New Hope",
I always tell myself to use the force,
No light-sabers involved,
Just us on this reckless crash course.

I won't breath deep and heavy,
Because I am no Darth Vader,
You are my Princess Leia,
And I will be your shining crusader.

I will promise you a hundred hugs,
Caress your hair,
As we go on our Ewok Adventure,
Where we will travel into nowhere.

Fate is the path to the light side,
Fate leads to a love that is true,
True love leads the way,
But I sense much fear in you.

Even thought there was a great disturbance in the force,
I mean you no harm,
Away with your feelings and emotions,
Give me your lovely arms.

A Jedi's strength flows from the heart,
There is no try,
There is no do or do not,
The enemy is gone I am your ally.

A love like ours is 3720 to one,
I warn you not to underestimate my powers,
There won't be any jedi mind tricks,
But a moment that will finally be ours.

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  • awww that was cute...i liked it keep up the good work MuChLoVe~unseentears

  • 19 years ago

    by Choti

    hey i love starwars.. frost off. second i love your poem it is relaly sweet and carries a lot of meaning. you have a lot of potential and talent. trust me. 5/5 nothgin less.

  • 19 years ago

    by SilentSymphony

    ....Oh.. im not trying to 'bug' ya or n e thing. But in the first stanza... the third line... i think you meant By instead of my. If not.. thats kewl. Just pointing out the obvious. =P

  • 19 years ago

    by SilentSymphony

    Haha. Wow. Can i say im a star wars nerd? Because i loved this poem. I like how you used star wars to describe your love. hehe, and thanks for putting the 'Ewoks' in their.... i love thoes little things. Great job. 5/5

    May the force be with you.lol O_o
    -Courtney

  • 19 years ago

    by Rebecca Walker

    It is good.