Five more minutes

by Liam   May 10, 2005


Sitting here on my cold floor
My body’s aching, throat’s sore
Darkness coming from all around
Lie in my bath, hope to drown

I’m so damn lonely,
I’m so messed up,
I’m a mental freak
So come and lock me up

I’m my only friend now
And I don’t want to know
Feelings of pity, self despair
Locked away in my grungy lair

I’m so damn lonely,
I’m so messed up,
I’m a mental freak
So come and lock me up

I gaze upon the stars,
And my wrists full of scars,
I stare one last stare into the sky
Just five more minutes left to die.

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  • 18 years ago

    by **baby_girl**

    thats kwl like da rest i like ur style lol xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    I agree with karma every1 does sumtime, its reli well written but tht doesnt even explain it properly, well keep it up.
    Plz comment and vote on a few of mine

  • 18 years ago

    by Greta

    Hey, just to let you know, i can really relate to that. i used to cut myself about 2 years back. You already told me that you have stopped cutting, but if you ever need to talk then you can just message me.
    -Greta

  • 18 years ago

    by Greta

    Hey, just to let you know, i can really relate to that. i used to cut myself about 2 years back. You already told me that you have stopped cutting, but if you ever need to talk then you can just message me.
    -Greta

  • 18 years ago

    by Robin Dan Persie

    Liam i think your poem has good depth and i know how u feel u should now what i mean
    Daniel(bro)

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