Comments : If You Think You Can't Hold On

  • Aww...that was so good! you write great friendship poems!

  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    wow. so powerful. i love this poem. it is so good. i think you did an awsome job writing this. great job.you really have a way with these words. you put them together so perfect. awsome job. i hope that you are ok? and i hope that whoever this is too is alright also? keep up this awsome job it was great. Much Love

    Nick

  • Awesome poem. You can tell you care a lot for your friend. Great job! 5/5! Keep writing!
    ~Sandra~

  • 18 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    thanks!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bizarre

    You know what, that's a very good poem. I'm starting to understand it all now... Great job. *5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    *tear* *tear* *tear* a classic, Car. Just beautiful....omg.....tell Zac I love him so much...I love you too!! So great to read this poem...refreshing, but definitely depressioningly touching.....lol.......that's not a word is it?? Oh well, Yo soy estupida. HEHE.....

    ~Sierra

  • 18 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    lol, i officialy love that word!~ I shall tell him for you... thanks, Sierra! Love ya lots!