I like how you open up to the reader, that in itself is often a very hard ask to accomplish.

I feel as though in the beginning you kinda struggle and overuse the simple sentence of "is a risk". But that is only my opinion.

Overall a good job. Keep writing.

--Sher

In my opinion you used "is a risk" way to much along with the word "someone" You have good meaning and emotion. The poem needs some work. It has potential! Take Care! Brooke~

Good poem!

Good poem, it shows how many people feel about love and portrays the feelings well, some interesting points were made and I enjoyed reading it, well done and keep it up

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Although I must disagree and say that love is worth the risk....it is still a well-written poem.

~*~Christina~*~

Mich --
You want honest feedback, right? Well, who wouldn`t..
Honestly, this kind of scared me! The exclamation points showed how much emotion you truly expressed in this poem, and it was great. I really liked it, it grasped my attention throughout the whole thing, and the flow was good. I can picture this in a scary movie. You know, like, a big scary witch is screaming things at the innocent little farm kids, and, that would be something she would say. I`d probably pay 10 dollars just to see someone actually say that.
5/5
Amazing.

Samantha Hollywood