Great poem! 5.0 Check out my poems! thanx! ♥

hey this was great too! I love the way you wrote the poem and it wasn't boring and I wanted to read more by the time I got to the end of the poem. You are very good at this! Keep it up. :)

nice short cute poem i did get a vird that flew into or car it died though *remembers the sad little birdy* great job

Wow, short but powerful. Good job. 5/5 Thanks for the comment.

~no more

this is gonna sound weird, but cant i stay in the nest with you and go out for a little hile? haha i still wanna know that i can perch on your window and you'll fix any wounds i might have collected, or that i can fly in and sing to you when you feel sad, or that i may just sit on your shoulder and talk to you for a while....
~Freak~

yes, i agree with No More. its a GREAT POEM! 5/5 keep up the good wrk.

Once again, great poem! The idea is pretty original and the flow was good too. I must say I really enjoyed that poem...The last lines were my favorite! Keep writing and take care,
Satuxxa

Aw okay i keep commenting on ALL your poems i know but this one is great. Its so cute and happy and im glad that the birdy survived. You had to let it go in the end (is there a deeper meaning to the poem i wonder) Anyway another 5/5.

Kelly
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