Hey Christina,
Great poem! ~5~
_JaMiE_

good continuation from the first part....

uhm, not bad...you have a spelling mistake and you should have made it clearer who it was the poem was about. made it connect more to you to make it more personal.
~Freak~

great job!! keep up the good work..
*~*cryingontheinside*~*
xoxoxo

Great poem sweetie! I liked it a lot! Keep up the great work!
Love always....
Haily
XOXOXOXOX

I loved this part too, very beautifully written....I think she sounds like a person I would like to meet =0) lol....Keep writing girl, you have talent!!

Please comment on my poem My pain remains inside or my sister wnats to die, I would really appreciate it...Thank you in advance..

*Hugs Sabrina*