I don't care so much for the ending, it seems abrupt and almost as if you didn't know how to finish it...Usually that means you were already done or that you have more to say...lol...Anyway, otherwise, this is an awesome poem. And I truly mean that.

It's good, but confused - as in the imagery doesn't fit together, or make to much sense, but the message and power is clear.

nice work.

Excellent poem! 5 Sometimes I feel the same way!!!

You have your very own style man, and thats really great..I've just read a couple of your poems, and you seem to use the same form on your poems, and you are good at it...

I think you manage to express your feelings very well...

I found this one a little confusing, but I'm not really good at poetry, so you are at least not to blame..

Off to read another=)

cheers

wow, i really liked how your poem flowed and the emotions you displayed. nice work.

Again, I can easily relate. Well done, truly.

this flowed well...i enjoyed reading it..well done :)
5

wow thats another great poem/ I feel bad for not saying more but theres not much to say but wow, great job!

it was written good, to me though the flow was a bite off
good poem tough, liked the way you use words it was good the story was good

I loved this poem. Very deep. Excellent poem, dear. Keep writing and stay strong. 5/5

-Ice

Confusing but full of feelings which often are. Good job. X

Really awsome poem one of the best ones i have read x x