Very very moving! I loved this poe mhuny, the flow was perfect and each word chosen complimented your emotions. This poem is very powerful and very well written. 5/5 take care huny

Love and Hugs
xX MAZ Xx

thanx babe!! i really appreciate that :) u take care too,
dani xoxo

very sad.. but good job!....

xoxo,
Heather**

It's sad, but really good. Hope you're okay. Keep it up and stay strong. 5/5

~no more

the way you only revealed the girl being you in the last line works well, very effective. brilliant write, keep it up

lu -x-x-x-

this poem was really heart felt. good job I loved it.
Much Love,
Jordan-paige

I'm sorry that happened to you.
It's sad,very moving...keep it up and stay strong!

much love,

~becca~

I understand this because my life was not the greatest either! I know just how you feel.

nice 1

I'm just running out of praise! another fantastic poem....luv em

OMG, I just love your poems... you write fantastic. i could just read your poems over and over again...

keep up the fantistic writing..

.-¤*¤-.Rikke.-¤*¤-.