Comments : The Tragic End

  • 18 years ago

    by lee

    Omg that was so sad. and I'm so sorry for that happening. I know there's nothing i can say to make you feel better, but...I'm sorry that that happened. and you wrote a really awesome poem. it deserves a 5!

  • Wow this poem is totally amazing ... way to put everything into how u felt and the problem .. wow i was crying inside and a little outside this was very very deep and very very very well written i amdire your work .. and keep up the write you have a gift '

  • 18 years ago

    by SilentTearDrops

    Your a beautiful writer. and you def. can express something. if your ever feeling down remember i care to know you are alright. even if we dont know eachother. i hate to know that someone feels alone b.c ik how it can feel

  • 18 years ago

    by vamp

    Loved it...really intense

  • 18 years ago

    by April

    Hey, my name is April and i really love all of your poems. I can relate, i used to cut and well it makes me see how stupid i was because i really didn't have that bad of a life as most people. if 3 of my close friends commited suicide i most likely would've been right behind them. stay strong, it does get better.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cassie

    Omg im bawling my eyes out im soo very truley SORRY .. omg u found her .. thats so tragic idk what iwould do!omg !!u are so strong ! im so sorry .!! hang in there!

  • 17 years ago

    by AngelWithTheBrokenWings

    All ur poems are really good. wish i could write like u.

    xxxx ..::Broken Lullaby::..