Very good. I loved it. I can't wait to read the rest of your new ones.

Eden

Oy, nick, this was a good write... I know exactly how you feel. I put on a mask of happiness around others... don't get me wrong, I'm happy sometimes, but when I'm hurt or sad or angry, I cover it up until I get home... I can totally relate to this poem. Fabulous work, 5/5
Take Care, God Bless
Carq

Wow, this is really good. I love the style of this poem!

Keep writing Nick. It does help release your emotions.

I can relate too, i do the exact same thing. There are few ppl who see my true emotions. And now, there are even less.