All I can say id outstanding!

awww that's really sweet.. and really sad.. i know yu have eard this and i know u will probably jst say .. " teah right".. but truly i know how u feel. except he broke up with me. i want him back but right now we are jsut best friends.. so its kinda.. ehhh. tc of your self alright. u jsut need to be happy and settle as frinds. and prove your love to her. e-mail me if u need ne thing. and plese check out my poems. But this deserves 5/5

awwwwwwww thats so sweet, sigh.. thats the problem when your in love, you either take them for granted, or you get all paranoid.. so dangerous.... im guessing this is true, do you still speak to her?

nopp.. i can't speak to her.. i love her too much..

good job great poem

wow, i love the ending!! gave me shivers and it's so true. great poem. i'm really sorry that things haven't worked out for you and this girl. my thoughts are with you and i hope that she realises what a sweetie you really are. take care and keep writing!!
love cim xxx

it is very interesting 2 c a guy knows not 2 take a female 4 granted, i liked it!!

good dude
thier isnt anything someone can tell someone else about love.
you can love someone like you're life, and still lose them.
the only advice is, do is to love the way you know.
sorry about you're girlfriend, but just know that people in this place are going through the same.
like me.
be strong man, and i know how hard that is.
things will be fine, and im saying that to myself as im saying that to go.
keep it up

Hey, i am soo sorry for what happened to you, im in a relationship too rite now and i dunno wut happened but i am always getitn mad at my boyfriend for no reason like for small things i shouldnt have gotten mad over and i jsut cant change that about me, i really love him and i dont know what to do:( Anyway, Great poem, i loved it
~Nadiya

Omg this is really good i love it keep writing and plz check out some of my poems