Comments : The Valley

  • 18 years ago

    by Ellie

    *sigh* I understand this feeling. Excellent job at bringing back memories.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Well expressed indeed. I commend you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    Strong words all and all but the flow was abit off the message was there but in all I think this could have been better if you just reworded a few lines good try though...

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    I can well relate to this one. I felt all the pain. Excellent job. you are talented.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Monkey See~*~Monkey Do*~

    very expressive poem. great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    You expressed yourself in a unique way! Another amazing write! Keep it up! Take Care~! Brooke