Incredible write! Keep it up! *5/5*
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Wow, absoultly beautifully written peice of poetry. I loved it. The flow was good. As well as the structure. Only thing is,

How could we even think that
We both were hurt
Apparently it never cam to us
As a major alert

Should be

How could we even think that
We both were hurt
Apparently it never came to us
As a major alert

Other than that awesome job and a great write.

Ciao, Joe