i love it....

I know what it's like to watch the one who says they love you turn around and screw everything up by getting with another person...this is a really good poem!!! Hey, I read your profile, you got that from "Long Day" by Matchbox Twenty, that is one of my favorite groups/songs!!! Take care, PEACE

Wow, beautiful poem .. I love your work and I think you are very talented. Stay strong.
Take care always,
- Shell xx

Wow, this has to be one of your best poems yet. The whole rope that is fraying was brilliantly made. The words used and the rhythm all flowed perfectly. Wonderful job sweetie, and i'll always be your friend no matter what anyone else may say :)
Much love,
-A

it's a wonderful poem, and everyone can and deserves a friend. always one of your firneds!

~PLP! lots of hugs and love~

o.O who said you cant have friends. ill kill them if you wish. :P everyone can have friends. its impossible to live without them for long anyway. great poem again. even if its written at 5 am. whoever that guy was, he's a jerk and doesnt deserve you
~Freak~

this is really great I think it flows well and I can uderstand what you are saying. I really like 'Like a rope around my ankles, You slowly pull me back down.' It is so deep i love it keep it up and take care
Polly ~X~

Hey this is really good i like it and i know how it is. Keep it up. 5/5