Wow, very well written peice of poetry. I loved it. However I do have some advice.

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I never would have guessed
They can mean so much
I gaze into them
Feeling so much

"so much" is repeted to much in such little time perhaps try doing this,

I never would have guessed
They can mean so much
I gaze into them
Feeling your touch

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I get this fuzzy feeling
Staring at them for too long
I get this weird feeling
That I really do belong

you jump straight into "staring" it really doesn't flow, try this maybe,

I get this fuzzy feeling
When staring at them for too long
I get this weird feeling
That I really do belong

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I never felt this way
Not with any other guy
I am still kind of confused "though"
Baby please tell me why

Seems like "though" is thrown in at the end, take it out and it flows better

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Take out the second "that" it is not needed

When our faces are close
About to kiss
My mind is spinning
And that that I would miss

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Perhaps use "it's" instead of "it is" in the last line to make it flow better

What should I say
When I stare at you
Do I say I love you
Because you know that it is true

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Perhaps change this,

I am sorry that I laugh sometimes
You might be kind of mad at me
You are the best thing in my life
I just don’t really see

To this,

I am sorry that I laugh sometimes
For you might be kind of mad
But you are the best thing in my life
And I am really glad

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Our eyes connect
Between me and you

That says the same thing almost, perhaps try doing this,

Our eyes connect
I could look all night
But who would of ever knew
That eyes can say so much

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Once again wonderful job. Keep up the good work.

Ciao, Joe

This was awesome loved the way it flowed

Good subject and nice form...i loved it

Wow great poem luv it!<3

Awww thats a lucky bf right there :)

A brighT writinG..... 5/5

luzaN