Awesome write . I loved it.
Take care & God bless

Many times you see a poen that starts strongly and dies because it gets too complicated. Not so here mate,

Cracking job.

B

Effin Amazing.

This jerked my heart, so much emotion, so deep. plz read and comment sum of mine

Thanks 4 commenting on my poems. it means a lot 2 me. so thanks. once again i must say that this poem it just totally.......... perfect

Hey Mel. Great poem really sweet but sad at the same time luv leesh xo

I love the trinity idea you have used, so true, sad and beautiful. Amazing write, and the same of all your poems.
Thank you for your comment on my poem, it means a lot.
*VioletRaven*

Very well written... a pleasure to read.

Great job....

Shows that you can capture the essence and deepness with few words. Great write!