Shut the door

by crystal   May 19, 2005


I knew this would happen
stuff like this always does
you said you really loved me
but you didn't know what love was

there was another person
i knew it from the start
you said you'd rather be with me
but you didn't wanna break her heart

i told myself to move on
and that it wasn't worth it
i have to separate myself
i told myself that i could do it

but things aren't going as i planed
I'm to close to the fire
my friends all tell me to step back
before the flame get higher

i try to pull myself away
but you're pulling me in closer
you tell me what i wanna know
you say what you know i wanna hear

but I'm done listening to you
it's not worth it anymore
I've burned all the bridges
I've shut the door

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  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Wow...great ending! so unexpected! I loved it!
    I really loved this stanza "but things aren't going as i planed
    I'm to close to the fire
    my friends all tell me to step back
    before the flame get higher"

    Great flow and great everything lol...

    x)

  • 18 years ago

    by LoVeAbLeShOrTie

    Hey this is really good..i really liked it..keep up the great work 5/5
    luv ya,
    LoVeAbLeShOrTie

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    hmm what to say about this one,, i liked it alot. i loved the last paragraph tho. it was a perfect ending

  • 18 years ago

    by samara

    i like this. . . especially the last two verses. thats exactly what im tryin to do with my ex love . . . oh wellz lol keep writting hun your good at it.
    xoxo samara

  • 18 years ago

    by FAKE-is-the-new-trend

    wow great poem i really liked it cause its happen to me be4
    and thanx for the comment on my poem

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