Great poem...I liked you choice of words, but what made you write it? Corissa81506

I'm an abuse victim. I have been abused for 13 years (I'm 17, it started when I was 4). I've been abused by almost 20 different people. Needless to say, things like that can make a person very depressed lol. I don't actually want to commit suicide, but writing poetry is an outlet for me; a way of getting my feelings out without doing anything crazy. And thank you, I appreciate the comment. I'm glad you liked it.

And if you want to read a couple others, I have another in sadness - Broken. One is in explicit - I'll Find My Redemption.

awsome i think it's a very good idea to get your feelings out writting the on paper than to do anything you may regret

chao! take care

(sorry for commenting that much on your poems ^^ they're truly touching to me)

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Wow. Your writing is so powerful. This poem just blew me away! I love it! Keep writing! 5/5!