that voice remains causse you give it the power to do so. Don't let it overtake your taughts.
Nice writing aswell.
Tim

I really liked it. Great job. <3333

hey that was so good and so true..GReat write girly..<3 lindsey

great poem! i love it! easy to relate to and beautifully written! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

I love it.. Alot of true emotion.. Keep writing and take care (always)) xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Awesome poem. That is exactly how I have felt many times before.

Excellent poem. The voice is the conscience. I gave it a 5!

...wow... good...poem...*wide eyes*

you have to check your spelling and the verbs that you use...like 'your' should be 'you're' and 'their' should be 'they're'...srry to gripe and moan, but most ppl know the basics of those things... srry.

-ashyxx-

5/5 elissa, loved it. i hear voices sometimes lol.
love always
your friend
harley

i know what you mean ,your poem just explained my feelings

right off the bat
ever -should be- every
other then that it was pretty good. I think if you explained the voices abit more and gave us a clue into when and when you got them the story line would be abit more involved. If you get a chance please gaze upon any of my featured poems please vote and comment while you gaze take care...

I like that and so true indeed. Keep it up and keep writing.

Jennifer aka CRAZE

i hear ya on this!! :)
*~peace and love~*