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Aww, Ann, beautifully done. Thank God your dad's okay. Bless your dear heart. 5/5 |
by Angie
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Ann, this was beautiful! Dad is lucky to have you, God will give you the strength to be there for dad and yes you were raised very well, by two wonderful and special people. You know where I am if you need me. You and dad are in my thoughts and prayers. Bless your beautiful heart, love ya |
by Amanda
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What a beautiful poem whilst my new one is rather sad but i'm in a real mess. Sorry if i'm not so talkative in this message but this poem really makes me feel better. Amanda :) |
by Morgan
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This was a great poem. 5/5 all the way. It's like I can feel what you're feeling from this poem. I wish you and your dad the best. |
by Heather
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Wow thats soo sad!... im soo sorry to hear that!... This poem is really deep and I think that you should show your Dad this poem... it will make him try harder and always be there for you! |
by Jodie Davis
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Your poem isreally good and it did make me think. cuz i just lost my dad in feb 11. so i know how u kinda feel but i still have my mom and my moms grandparents , but im sry for you. and i think that was a very good poem and keep up the good work. |
by maira
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sorry i hope it gets better i put u in my prayers. |
by Eibutsina
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Always a pleasure reading your spectacular poetry Ann :o) |
by Dawson
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wow thats soo good but sad |
by Natalie84
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Wow....beautiful and so heart felt! Excellent write....one of my favorites! Sorry to hear about your father and I hope all is well! I will keep you in my prayers ann!! 5/5 :) |
by kat
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your poem is very inspiring! Keep it up! Hoping that your Dad will be in good health for years to come so you can share more fruitful years ahead! |
by HJ
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Wonderful heartfelt piece. Flow and diciton flawless. |
by Michelle
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This poem was so awesome!! Do you mind if I give it to my dad for fathers day cuz it seems to fit him perfect .. I loved it thanks xoxoxo |
by Baby Rainbow
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Awww hunny, this touched me so much, you are so incredibly strong. i hope your dad is proud of you. excellent poemx x x x x take kare sweetie x x x |
by Heidi
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This really touched my heart. My dad is sick with cancer, so i know how scary it is to wonder when he's going to go. Stay strong sweetie, and i will do the same! very good writing. 5/5 |