Comments : God please, I write this to you

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticMystery

    This poem is perfect. I loved it. I tried committing suicide but God always has something stored for you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Broken Butterfly

    WOW!!! That was a GREAT poem. It may one day help me out. I'm proud of you for changing your mind like that. God really works in mysterious ways.

  • 18 years ago

    by amanda v

    WOW!!!!!!!!thats an eye opener i was falling a sleep till i read urs it woke me right up and thats a good thing.

  • 18 years ago

    by LostDreamer

    That was a great poem.. im glad that you didn't go through with it!.. stay strong.. keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by LostDreamer

    That was a great poem.. I'm glad that you didn't go through with it!.. stay strong.. keep writing!

    Cee

  • 18 years ago

    by Jasonsboo

    That was a beautiful poem! You are a very talented writer! And you deserve a 5/5 which I am giving you on this poem..I hope to see more of your work. Keep writing your a great poet and you have a wonderful talent for writing poems! Maybe, if you want...You could read a few of my poems and comment on them!?!?!?! It would mean a lot to me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Erin

    That was a very good poem** its very inspirational to all thoes cutters out there and how they can come down to a conclusion that there is something you can do, and theres always someone you can go to if you need help. no matter wat. It was a very good poem keep up the good work*~~!
    Erin****

  • 18 years ago

    by Jordan

    Omg thank you to everyone who has read, voted, or written a comment! It seriously means so much to me.

    Much Love,
    Jordan-Paige

  • 18 years ago

    by tiffany

    WOW! great! i loved it very emotional and i love the ending and the choice made! 5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Crystal

    I love your poem.. i cut.. i just dont have enouf courage to put down the knife.. i'm so happy that u r still here.. that poem was touching.. i voted 5:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather

    Jordan:Your Strong And I Hope You Stay That Way! Good Luck In The Future!

  • 18 years ago

    by melanie

    You don't even know how many lives you could change and save with that. I used to cut, and this is the reason i stopped. not from the reassurance of my mom, she is still too blind...My best friend, haley, did that for me. She was there for me. Not like my other friends, cause they cut too. I loved it, and you deserve a million dollars for writing it....godbless, and thanx for the comment on my poem, it meant a lot to me....

  • 18 years ago

    by Nikki

    Wow I love all of your peoms but this one is my favorite...
    Love always, N!kk!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brady

    I love you so much and to read what you where going through helps me understand.

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSilent Tearsxx

    This poem reminds me alot about my life, except difference is my mum didn't help me, she took things away from me, made me dump my bf, and grounded me, lol. spewin. anyways this is a really good poem. well hit me back if ya have time...

  • 17 years ago

    by Brady

    I Like this one alot I like your mom to :-) Im glad she is there to help you through things

  • 17 years ago

    by Anick

    Wonderful!
    You're a very telented person.
    Keep writing!
    XoX
    A-T.

  • 17 years ago

    by katrina

    Oh my God i started crying...I know exactly how that feels. It was like reading my own pain and then salvation.

  • 16 years ago

    by veronica Lynn

    Wow, jordan i got to hand it to ya dat is a good yet very sad poem...i read dat and it gave me goosebumps so yeah i have poems that i wrote when i was seventeen but i lost my username and stuff but u commented on my poems if you remember my name is veronica freeman but it has changed to veronica stirewalt but yeah i will put my poems on here so you can go over them to see what i need to fix kk bye now

  • 16 years ago

    by JSydney

    =[ that is beautiful... thank you...