That was flat out.. .beautiful. I luved it.
Excellent job.. captured the sadness : ) Hope you're doing okay, and def. a 5/5 from me!!
XoxoX
Robin-

hey sara.. another great one! email or call anytime! talk to you at school. once again great poem 5/5
Cara

thanks...im glad u liked it

well i dont like it. i love it. this reminds me of a similar situation that i have been in many times. best of luck to you, great write.

But in this world, this demented generation, words mean nothing, they are only lies.

i really like that line. keep up the good work.

But in this world, this demented generation, words mean nothing, they are only lies.

i really like that line. keep up the good work.

I liked it, it was beautiful. And thanks for the comment!
Keep it up