oh hell yeah, you go on wit it sista. I'm goin to check the other one. Hope its as good as this one. ;)

Wow!!!

OKAY

love the details turns me on

I like it. I'm going to the second part. Keep writing! Please che3ck mine out!

woah!!

THIS IS HOTT

Hot! Good job! ...off to read part two ;)
Love always,
~BJ~

I liked this poem. It isn't as long as other poem in this area but it was still good. I gave it a 5/5.