wow, that poem was amazing. it made me feel really sad but also lucky so thank you and sorry

XsaraX

Wow that was so sad! Amazing poem! You wrote it so well! So sorry about your loss. Brooke~

i like how you express your poems....great job again

omg. that poem wa so sad. expecailly the ending. i am so terribly sorry about what happened to you and your boyfriend. i wish you the best of luck. i cant believe im crying. this poem was sos so sad. im sorry once again. this poem deserves a 5/5 and keep your head up. things will get better. if not soon then eventually. be patient and belive in yourself. 5/5 and im sorry once again.

Best wishes and apologies,
paulette

This one is better than the last one I read...

I strongly agree with the message...I've felt that way=)

excellent 5.0

very sad poem I love the twist at the end...totally caught me off gaurd..

Great poem.

Love,
Tiff

Wow.. that is really sad...I like it...keep writting

Great poem!~ ♥

I don't feel that this was one of your better poems. However the emotion behind the words compensate for this.

Keep Writing
Nici

I love it...very good.

this was a good poem it had a strong message to it and was a good read...