Comments : Wasteland of hopes

  • 18 years ago

    by steve

    awesome poem for 14....
    Wasteland of hopes
    No way back now
    You reached your destination
    You'll die in here
    Spare me a tear
    I won't come back to visit

    it sounds like this person is in a prison...I dont know though, Id like if you could tell me....great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley Marie

    This poem is great, it has true emotion!! 5/5
    Hayley-Ree xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    excellent

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Monkey See~*~Monkey Do*~

    Great poem... seems like there's quite a bit of emotion. 5/5

    -Sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    That was good, I enjoyed the emotion and it kept me interested throughout the entire poem, well done xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    Nice job. Really makes you think. I notice you are from Greece, I am Greek myself! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Wow full of emotions! You did an amazing job! Well done! I really enjoyed it! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    This poem is pretty good. Again, not my style, but that doesn't mean it's bad.

    -Tiff