Very nice job. I wrote a monotetra a while back but wasn't near as good as this one. Keep up the amazing work 5/5

With Love & Respect.
Heather M Craig

not bad but one question; is this supposed to be a chant? becasue it'll make one hell of a good chant!

i'd publish this poem anyday :)

Wow this is new, going to try it one day, good work, thanks for sharing it.

Wow, this was amazing. I have yet to write a monotetra, but after reading yours I should think about it. The thing is to find the subject and inspiration. Throughly enjoyed the read. Now you've got me thinking!

Cheers!

Steve