he he he... i love it .. nice work :)

wow...pretty cool poem...at the start it seems so child like with all the imaginative stuff...and yet...when i read the ending stanza, the mood just suddenly changes so fast...for some reason it makes ya think..i like this poem although i dont know why...haha...keep it up :D

4/5. i like the uniquness of this poem, and it was pretty funny at first, some of the ryming seemed forced, but it still flowed good. This seems like a dream i would have, kinda twisted and strange, did you dream this?

Very creative! 5/5

That was so weird and i liked it alot you deff had a diff ending than iwould have ever even imagined. it was like a story poem it was sweet.

That was incredibly weird LOL I loved it .. kinda had me thinking of jealousy

I want one. Can I borrow it or does it have any kin?

Haha! wow! this is ingenious! :D I love dark humour and this is some quality stuff! yet another good 'un from Katie

Well, that is interesting to say the least... very different.... you should get a 5/5 just for being so creative :)

Mmm, i like it. It s nice and wierd. x

Like always,u have a way to dress a situation with bitter but beautiful images.It's magical,it's unique