Comments : Cannot fight it

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Sad but beautifully written. I'm so sorry that you are having a bad day. I hope things will get better for you sweetie.
    I'm sending you a great big hug and things will get better, give it time. love ya, *Ann*

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    My sweet sweet Amanda, I'm so sorry that I wasn't here for you yesterday...I was just so low too....But now I wished that I was!!! Please be alright, talk to me....I need you here!!

    I am wishing for a friend to come and take me tonight,
    show me something better and point me to the light,

    I wish that I was by your side, so I could show you the light!! But I'm not, so the one thing I can offer you is my love, my heart and my ears to listen.

    *Love you sweetie*

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Ohh...I love this poem. I can't believe that you mother would say things like that.....This poem is really heartbroken.

  • 18 years ago

    by CynicxSincexBirth

    very nice. thats how i feel.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    A hug from me! So sorry you're feeling this way Amanda I wish there was something I could do! You can feel so much pain and sorrow when you read this! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Wow. Very powerful words. Keep this up. Terrific job.

    Love much,
    Tiff

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    This was alot better the story was very clear and the message was profound very well done I feel pat yourself on the back. Take Care...

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Great poem.. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Prince Enigma

    Really good poem, had a lot of feeling to it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Prince Enigma

    Really good poem, had a lot of feeling to it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    Know how it feels...all thoughts rush around desperate to escape but unable to all at once...hang in there.

  • 18 years ago

    by paulina.♥

    This poem was amazing. I loved it. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by M MEM

    Aww im sorry... its good to get your thoughts down while you have them