This is so beautiful. I think it is great and the love that you express is truly a love filled with passion.

Good Job!

--Sher

Such a unique beautiful poem! So full of love! Your feelings so very well expressed with perfect words! Nice work! Take Care! Brooke~

great write...

You put your feelings into words in a most excellent way, and managed to keep me wanting more till the very end...It flows good and the rhyming scheme is fine, except for a stanza where you changed it...whether that was a mistake or not, I'm not too sure, but it didn't bring the poem down anyway...

Good job

It sent chills up my back..lol, it was great.

Great Poem, lovely rhyming, good job!

I've commented on this one before=) anyone else?

wow your words are so beautiful

aw its so beautiful! love is a....uh...lovely...thing....u did an excellent job on the rhyming nd it flowed so nicely i loved every line!! great job 5/5!!

this was really sweet. i enjoyed reading it. keep up the good work
~Freak~

You painted a picture in my mind and you kept me interested throughout. I love the imagery in it....

The only thing I saw that was a down fall is you changed up the rhyming scheme a bit. It didn't hurt the poem it just threw the flow off a bit.

Hope all is well....very nice write!! :)

the rhyme scheme was changed on purpose...

it goes..

a
b
a
b

a
b
a
b

a
a
b
b

a
a
b
b

a
b
a
b

a
b
a
b

thought it'd be more exciting.

Wonderful ending.... the combination of love and the environ. always works well.. great work

Hoping the best for you

Love,
Ipsita