Comments : A Dream (part 1)

  • aww i gave you five because i loved it
    well done
    really nice and touching

  • 14 years ago

    by rbmo401

    Wow this almost buries the last poem of yours that i read. Such amazing ability to reach out to the reader and bring them into your world. Really good ending to i liked the i simply smile part that rocked. Thanks so much again for the read. Rbmo401.

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nice!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Christine

    I love how well you express your feelings in words. Sometimes that is so hard, but you do is beautifully! I love it!