Comments : Recapturing My Youth

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    I love the way you reminisce about your youth. It's great. 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    "When I was young
    I was sheltered from the worldly truth
    Oh, how I wish I could go back
    and recapture my youth"

    --Oddly enough, I was sitting in the park yesterday noticing the innocence of this little boy's eyes and the naivety of his smile......I recalled the days of simplicity yearning for a dream and now, feel the age jump at you wishing to go back, to feel the simplest treasures in life.---Beautiful poem, Holly. It describes an idea that has been rewinding in my head for a while now and you conveyed it wonderfully.

    Love you!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dead As Yesterday

    Holly, nice write I think we all wish at one time or another for a chance to start over and revisit simpler times.
    5/5
    Dave.....

  • 18 years ago

    by Forever29

    Youth is full of hopes and dreams. Don't you just wish you could turn back time? 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by jencam

    i am right there with you!!!! great job!