Heya huny, I really liked this poem, its written so beautifully!

As for suggestions, Im not good with titles but maybe something like 'Raw depression' 'Shattered soul' or 'lifeless meaning'....soz I suck at titles

Love and Hugs
xX MAZ Xx

i think "hazy" might fit it well.....just a suggestion

i think the titles great as it is, and beautiful poem, amazingly written.

XsaraX

Like the way the lines flow and...well everything really.

Great rhythm, great choice of words...If you brushed it up a little, it would be GREAT...lol...Not that's not really really good already, but I think you know what I mean.

wow, awesome detail, I could see your actions, great job.....sad poem, life can be overbearing sometimes, poetry is a good way to vent, love the poem keep up the good work and congrats on the comm degree, Im inthe Marines and I do communications repair work

Very well written came together perfectly! Really enjoyed this poem! Take Care! Brooke~

there are like no words to describe how much i can relate to this. again your writting just brings to life the situation and the feeling and maybe its just because i have been there i can feel it so much but just your words can take me back to those days