YOU are such a great writer keep it up and write some more stuff ....

read mine if you have time

Very good poem the representations of these elements is good.

take care

i loved it great job 5/5

check out my poems sumtime please

~krystal~

I just love your work. I would never come up with a theme like this. You needa give me some tips on how to write good poems like you. 5 thumbs up!!...

That was pretty cool aye, ireally liked it! it was different and not a boiring read! well done aye, and im looking forward to here more!!!
5/5
Xox Bam

i really liked this poem it was good
i hope you can do more like these like fire or water

This is a fantastic poem, I love it.

awesome poem 5/5, i'm looking forward to reading about the other goddesses.check out some of mine and comment.
-ApRiL

Very well done, I enjoyed it alot keep up the good work.If you get time please look over any of my poems I would be greatful...