Comments : This Butterfly

  • 18 years ago

    by Christie

    Beautiful poem, I understand why you're upset but I also understand your parents, because it's an ugly world we live in :(. Good luck.

  • 18 years ago

    by Elissa

    This was really good, it was a good way of expressing how you feel, and I know how it is when parents just don't give you any freedom at all, how are you ever going to solve your own problems when you get older if you don learn how to now, but they don't understand that. Welll 5/5 on this poem
    Love always,
    Elissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Willow

    This was an awesome poem! I'm an only child, so everything my parents go through with me is a first. So I feel locked up to. But I do know they love me. Great Poem! exactly how I feel!

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    That was an excellent poem! 5.0 Sorry about your parents, sometimes i feel the same way...so i know how you feel! I hope you feel better! ♥

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Another Chemical Romance

    ong i know how u feel my parents started banning me from havin a SOCIAL LIFE!!!!!!!! preety soon there isnt going to b n e thing to ban

  • 18 years ago

    by kat

    nice poem! I know what your going through is very hard right now. At your age you will never understand why your parents are very protective. When i was your age my parents did the same and it sucks. Now that ive grown up i understood why they have to be that strict. It's also for your own good at this time, i guess! I just hope that time will come that they will let you spread your wings and fly if they know your ready to fly high!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Beautifully written, but as you grow older you will thank them with all your heart, this shows they love you, but everyone needs a little freedom which I hope they give you. hugs, love, *Ann*

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ.:Krissy:.ღ

    Awesome poem Christina! I can understand how you feel, but at the same time I can also see your parents' view. At least they care a lot about you and don't want you to get hurt. But I understand your view, too. But hey, maybe someday you'll thank them. I wuv you Christina! <3

    ~Krissy