A good description of different scenarios. You have a unique style which made the poem of interest. Keep it up! Take Care! Brooke

Me and my friend sitting next to me in class both agree that this is a 5/5

Hey this is a bit different to most of the poems i've read - i liked it alot! It kinda drew me in if ya get me. Very impressed and thanks for your comments. Very much appreciated. :)

Amazing poem I cant belive the rating on this...Im gving you a 5/5 for sure... Im loking forward to reading more...
Xox
Sherrie

Hm... you seem to be the angsty type of writer. It's very good compared to the rest who have to be slapped with a rhythm stick. Excellent job!

u are very talented and write like a published poet! keep it up, i cant wait to read more!

Hey there, I think that this is a very good poem actually, I like the way you don't write it about your depression, but thinking about what others might feel. Bravo.

Good poem! 5 Very scary!