That was amazing, beautifully written. so sad and very powerful...stay strong
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The decapitated King moves near,
Just a frightened boy, nows it's clear.
The Little boy cradles his knees,
Rocking with a non-existent breeze.

love that verse it jus shows wot abusive men really r! xxxx

Wow.... amazing... I could feel everything... it was great n_n

I really liked it.. very well written.. you described it so well it was like i was there.. great, sad but still great.. stay strong.. love ya EJ

Not boring at all! Very well written! I really enjoyed reading this poem it kept my interest. I can understand the abuse that comes from alcohol. My ex had a drinking problem and he would get violent. Not to the point that you described so well. Keep it up! Take Care! Brooke~

Thats so good! And I know what you meant by insane lol:p I was flattered :)