ooo, wow, wonderful rhyme and the story is told so well!
I really hope this is not similar to what you are going through.
5.5

L x

wow thats really sad.....i hope it isnt true...its a good poem

excellent. very well writen and a good message behind it.
~Freak~

Very good poem and what a profound story very powerful great job I would give it on the power of the message conveyed alone good writing keep up the great work!!!

Wow...This is amazing...u are a great writter...It is emotion filled and acttion packed....GREAT JOB Check out Love Always and To The Cutters and any others...plz

xoxo
Kayla

Excellent poem! 5.0 ♥

I can see that there is alot of sentiment in this poem and it was a good read!

Keep Writing
Nici

Once agian great.

already comment on this poem

Dang your poems are really good i havnt been let down yet. yer great