Comments : Blame and Broken Vows

  • 18 years ago

    by Forever29

    Hi Holly. I really love your rhyming poems, but free verse is great when you need to vent. I feel like I now have writer's block. I'm running out of inspiriation.

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Really, Holly, It's not bad at all. Many free verse simply suck but you hold a greater title. Use more poetry devices such as alliteration, similies, hyperboles, and metaphors would be a grand suggestion. I would love to see more free verse poetry by you. I'm growing to like it. =) 5/5

    Love you.